February 23, 2009

Chapter III - Compagnon de route

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Slowly, like following the beat of a lazy drummer, Armando was crossing the street.
Everybody knew who he was but still he would walk his way alone, always quiet, no one even saying a polite "good afternoon".
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Most of the people feared Armando's proverbial temper, but as time went by - and everyone gets older but only a few get wiser - many of those who feared him kept the distances just for the sake of a status that he obviously didn't have any more.
The sole exception was this boy that stopped in the side-walk the moment he saw the elderly man.
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-"Mr. Armando!" - he called.
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Safely reaching the other side of the road, the man then turned over to face the youngster.
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-"Hello, Nuno." - saluting, in his single-tone way of expressing anything, from joy to hate; resuming his pace, he knowingly expected the boy to catch up with him and this became true a few seconds later.
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-"How are you, Mr. Armando?" - and not waiting for the answer - "I went to your house, but you weren't there so I..."
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The anxious Nuno was silenced by a subtle yet firm gesture.
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-"I am here now. And returning home."
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Although used to keep his distance, Armando liked the boy; a brief smile crossed his face when remembering the day Nuno saw him installing a brand new telescope, and the inner struggle he must have had until fear from the old man was surpassed by curiosity.
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That was three years ago.
Since then, most of Armando's knowledge about astronomy and space had been transferred to his curious young friend and now, with Nuno already at the age of 15, even one of the telescopes and several books became his.
Still walking towards home, the inevitable question came.
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-"So what did the doctor say?"
-"The doctor knows nothing. I'll be taking some other tests."
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Only part of this was true; he would be indeed taking medical tests. But the doctor already knew something: blindness was steadily growing over his sight...
Other problems were also detected, and a general picture on his condition would be available only after a full battery of medical exams.
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-"But didn't you say your problem should be solved with spectacles and some rest?"
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Armando was tired of walking, arthritis penalizing each step, and the visit to the doctor hadn't helped much his spirit.
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-"The doctor could not prescribe those spectacles just because I said so, thus the need for some more medical exams..." - letting some impatience slip through his words.
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Nuno understood that this conversation should change direction so he gladly took it to his favorite theme:
-"So... is it ok to keep our plans for later today?"
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Buildings were becoming scarce and the road ahead lead to a solitary house, right in the middle of a hill facing the valley.
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-"Yes, there should be no problem." - and halting their march for a while, the man looked at his compagnon de route - "As usual I'll be feeling better after my nap; and the telescope is always in place and ready."
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The smile on Nuno's face was contagious and Armando couldn't help but to smile too.
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- "Great! I'll see you then!" - already running down the street - "I'm late for lunch! My mother's gonna be mad at me!"
In no time he had vanished, like flying in low altitude through the narrow streets of cobblestone.
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The old man kept walking, alone, along the road that led to the big house on the hill; his home.
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February 20, 2009

Chapter II - Looking forward

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William Steiner kept walking despite the heavy rain; he even slowed down his pace, like he meant to get completely soaked.
But that wasn't quite true.
He just couldn't help it but to refrain himself and admire what was destined to become his home for the next 18 months.

Now standing still, hands in his pockets, already unaware of the rain pouring down on him. The perfect subject of a black-and-white picture if only there was somebody to take a snapshot; it would be considered a classic.
A flash briefly illuminated William's surroundings, making him turn around, surprised. He smiled.
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-"I knew where you were headed! You just couldn't resist, could you?" - Rick Shepperd cried, trying to keep his voice above the wind and rain.
-"Yeah, and you were casually passing by in the neighbourhood!" - the other man replied with a laugh.
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Still holding a camera in his left hand, Rick pulled the photo that just had been revealed.
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-"Hey, this one is a classic!" - he handed the squared piece to the improvised model.
-"A classic should be black-and-white, not color." - joked him, although feeling good on how well he himself looked in the picture.
-"You're just envious of my new camera, Bill!" - unable to hide the smile of a proud owner, Rick was showing off.
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Acting like he knew nothing about the revival of instamatic cameras, William read the name on it.
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-"Say... the Polaroid TimeZero ZX150... Are you going on vacation or something?"
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Both men laughed feeling amused. But after that, silence imposed itself, right before the notion of wind and rain overcame everything, even their thoughts. They were now looking the same direction, and a respectful admiration could be devised in their expressions.
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-"Are you worried?" - Rick asked - "About the weather, I mean."
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William moved aside, standing as he was in the picture previously taken. He knew his friend was avoiding any mention to each own personal fears, whatever those fears were anyway. Every man has his demons to be confronted with, and sooner or later in life they'll pay a visit.
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-"No, not worried. Latest reports confirm what we knew before. It should rain until tomorrow morning, but after that... no strong winds, sunshine all the way."
And after a brief pause, continued:
-"What about you, Rick, are you worried?"
-"No, Sir!" - instinctively changing his posture to an all-military style, thus denouncing some level of anxiety, which made him feel a bit embarrassed - "I'm looking forward to it." - he reinforced.
-"Good." - a sympathetic William smiled again - "Let's go back before your pretty camera gets ruined under all this rain."
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The two men walked side by side under a slightly weaker rain. Each step closer to shelter left further away the massive Solaris IV rocket standing proud on its launchpad.
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February 17, 2009

Chapter I - Getting old

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The newspaper was carefully folded and put to rest on a small table next to the sofa.
This was the end of a daily ritual, where no page was left unread; typically, a two hours round.
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But the ritual was broken.
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Instead of leaving his comfortable seat, the man remained there, left hand rubbing the forehead while looking beyond the great window right in front of him.
The view never ceased to amaze him, but a growing headache was limiting his attention; he was looking but wasn't seeing.
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-"After 72 years..." - Armando rumbled to himself.
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He slowly stood up and walked three steps towards the transparent barrier separating him from the landscape.
These headaches were no longer a mystery, as they obviously appeared after each reading session, despite the fact he already had improved lighting conditions of this one room, his refuge, his solitary cell.
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Outside, the dimming sun created a scene like only few painters would be able to reproduce on canvas. But he was forcing himself to see the details he knew were there; a blur covered parts of his sight, and surely no fog was filling the air outside.
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-"Damn!" - more defeated than angry, unable to deny the truth.
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Slowly turning away from window, Armando picked the newspaper and paused for another while. A decision was made: he had to go to a doctor, and if glasses were needed... so be it.
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Progressing to the door, he couldn't help to feel pain by anticipation; arthritis was taking over his body and Armando knew that by the time he got to the bedroom his full weight would claim its price..
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Already disappearing into the dark corridor, one hand left behind to turn off the light, and then... gone.
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February 15, 2009

Let's get started

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My goal:
To write a novel.
I intend to write it here, directly, spontaneously, no safety net whatsoever.
This will imply eventual revision of any given chapter, anytime the need arises.
I hope some of the editing will be induced or inspired by readers of this blog; that would mean someone was actually reading it!
As I'm no native to english, difficulties are big enough to scare me a little but... here I am.

The story:
Although not even a word has yet been written, I obviously took the decision to move forward because I created a story in my mind. Besides a generic idea, I have already defined a structure to this story, and even its characters have been growing in my imagination to the point that the main character is almost like someone real to me.
As I can't imagine how things will evolve, each chapter of this novel will likely be built with several posts, so I'll have to number/name them accordingly (i.e. chapter 1 post 1, chapter 1 post 2, etc); alternatively, I could create a post for each chapter and edit them along the way. I'll make my decision later on...

I'll take my time to write, as real life has this way of imposing itself on my (diminishing) spare time.

And I say no more... for now.
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